Comments on: A Poem

By: fuat atalayer

fuat atalayer — Mon, 03 May 2010 08:41:13 +0000

thank you very much all comments.
you know it is difficult to write a poem in foreign language but it is not a bad one.

thanks and best regards
fuat

By: kristine

kristine — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 09:36:35 +0000

it’s a pretty cool poem..!
and i’m sure bridget’s gonna love it..!!!

By: Sarah

Sarah — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 02:18:03 +0000

I don’t know anything about poetry except for whether I like it or not. I liked it very much. You’ve got a real talent, and it’s a sweet tribute to Kahlan.

By: Vadim

Vadim — Sat, 16 Jan 2010 00:48:56 +0000

Mmm, can’t say anything. Just like rhyme more.
About the last line. I think he used “it” because he describes his feelings to this woman. And it may be like:
It feels like heaven
It is (This feeling is) called Kahlan.
Don’t know, how much it’s correct in English, never wrote something like this. And it’s only my suggestion.

By: the raven

the raven — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 18:23:05 +0000

agree with charlie, on the other hand;
i think the last line tells me that he feels she means a whole world to him. that is Kahlan. And agree she is heavenly.

By: Charlie Schmidt

Charlie Schmidt — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 03:39:14 +0000

That’s a nice poem. Just a suggestion: Shouldn’t the last line be “She is called Kahlan” rather thatn “It is called Kahlan”?

The poem is correct in that Kahlan is heavenly.