A Poem
January 13, 2010 10:23 am

A longtime fan of our site has sent us a Kahlan poem! Gotta love fan contributions!

This is told from Richard’s perspective during the episode Fury.

It is the same old loneliness,
Hasn’t changed a bit
It is the same old sundown,
Over the mountains
To the horizon of the ocean;
It is the love we share desperately
My love has the color of your eyes
My hopes like your hair;
Scattered by the wind

I don’t need a hint to find love
I know it found it.
Beside you I have the wings of an angel
Beside you I share the world
It is like heaven
It is called KAHLAN.

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6 Comments on "A Poem"

  • By Charlie Schmidt, January 13, 2010 @ 9:39 pm

    That’s a nice poem. Just a suggestion: Shouldn’t the last line be “She is called Kahlan” rather thatn “It is called Kahlan”?

    The poem is correct in that Kahlan is heavenly.

  • By the raven, January 14, 2010 @ 12:23 pm

    agree with charlie, on the other hand;
    i think the last line tells me that he feels she means a whole world to him. that is Kahlan. And agree she is heavenly.

  • By Vadim, January 15, 2010 @ 6:48 pm

    Mmm, can’t say anything. Just like rhyme more.
    About the last line. I think he used “it” because he describes his feelings to this woman. And it may be like:
    It feels like heaven
    It is (This feeling is) called Kahlan.
    Don’t know, how much it’s correct in English, never wrote something like this. And it’s only my suggestion.

  • By Sarah, January 20, 2010 @ 8:18 pm

    I don’t know anything about poetry except for whether I like it or not. I liked it very much. You’ve got a real talent, and it’s a sweet tribute to Kahlan. :)

  • By kristine, March 4, 2010 @ 3:36 am

    it’s a pretty cool poem..!
    and i’m sure bridget’s gonna love it..!!!

  • By fuat atalayer, May 3, 2010 @ 3:41 am

    thank you very much all comments.
    you know it is difficult to write a poem in foreign language but it is not a bad one.

    thanks and best regards
    fuat

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